Death is Life’s shadow
But do not despair
Hold your head high
Take a fresh breath of air
For my mind is my ship
And the world is my sea
I shall drift through its waves
To find the best place for me
For if my heart is my sail
Then your laugh is the wind
That has carried me gently
To all the great places I’ve been
So on we adventure
Search and wander
And through it all, we always
Can’t help but ponder
Why people give up
When they say they have nothing to lose
Because then they have everything to win
It’s an easy path to choose
Because hope is the oars
That push through the sea
On the days without wind
Which sometimes come to be
But through the storms of sadness
And the rough seas of doubt
We always remember
The sun is sure to come about
At the front of the ship
We stand with our heads high
And reminisce about the simple old sayings
Of “hello” and “goodbye”
So smile, my friend
Let the wind blow through your hair
Keep your dreams strong
Take a fresh breath of air
This was a beautiful poem that I can completely relate to. I absolutely love it, well done! :D
ReplyDeleteThank you, Quinn!
ReplyDeleteI'm speechless, it sounds like a pro wrote it! It's beautiful in every way, I love it more than I can write in one single comment.
ReplyDelete*hugs Mir*
ReplyDeleteThank you.
*pulls Kallista to her feet and hugs her*
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words, my friend. And if anyone is not worthy of anything, it is me, for I'm not worthy to have such a great friend as you :D I'm very glad you enjoyed the poem.
Fantastic poem, Thalia! :D
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Bravo!
Thanks Skyril!
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem, Thalia!
ReplyDeleteReally pure and beautiful - my jaw actually dropped when I read it because I was so surprised how awesome it was! (though I don't know why I was- you always seem to have amazing poetry and stories!)
XD
Thank you Ruby!
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