tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post849727324706763071..comments2023-08-22T10:36:49.410-04:00Comments on The Limitations of Me: Ubiquitous - Book, Prologue.Min (Thalia)http://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-57684700414707534622011-06-28T16:44:09.468-04:002011-06-28T16:44:09.468-04:00Thanks Skyril!Thanks Skyril!Min (Thalia)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-15825888230664496862011-06-27T22:45:06.687-04:002011-06-27T22:45:06.687-04:00AHHH that's so creepy! And awesome and.... WOW...AHHH that's so creepy! And awesome and.... WOW!!!!<br />~shrieks with delight~<br />Brilliant, Thalia!Skyril A.K.A the Vociferous Chatterer, Loyal Forever and Always, The Ever-Present, the Pluviophilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957221088712534264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-50590578251452625872011-06-18T12:01:09.927-04:002011-06-18T12:01:09.927-04:00Oh, yes, thanks for that!
(I never proof read my ...Oh, yes, thanks for that!<br /><br />(I never proof read my stuff ^^')Min (Thalia)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-87996566252006641042011-06-18T11:56:59.652-04:002011-06-18T11:56:59.652-04:00Just one thing:
Hannet swept the room with her ey...Just one thing:<br /><br />Hannet swept the room with her eyes one last time before closing them. The judge gave the single, and the latch was released.<br /><br />Single should be signal. That's the only mistake I see!Everisse Eternahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16516767749138582228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-1296766415945507742011-06-18T10:04:23.635-04:002011-06-18T10:04:23.635-04:00Thank you Ev!Thank you Ev!Min (Thalia)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-44260279729652645332011-06-18T09:53:43.862-04:002011-06-18T09:53:43.862-04:00Oh my God, Thalia! This is amazing!Oh my God, Thalia! This is amazing!Everisse Eternahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16516767749138582228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-12682102667648246922011-06-17T21:24:14.478-04:002011-06-17T21:24:14.478-04:00Yay~
*hugs*Yay~<br /><br />*hugs*Min (Thalia)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-22438580195105569412011-06-17T21:15:10.487-04:002011-06-17T21:15:10.487-04:00Umm...
Umm...
I think I'll leave it up. Your...Umm...<br /><br />Umm...<br /><br />I think I'll leave it up. Your comment gave me the courage to do that ^^<br /><br />(I changed the phrase a bit. Is it better now?)Min (Thalia)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-59305481695893472032011-06-17T21:03:21.442-04:002011-06-17T21:03:21.442-04:00T-thanks so much Kallista :,D I'm so glad you ...T-thanks so much Kallista :,D I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You're right about that phrase, I wasn't too comfortable with it myself. It doesn't flow well. I'll be sure to let you know what I change it too.<br /><br />Do you think I should leave it up for others to read?Min (Thalia)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.com