tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post1696245216933409176..comments2023-08-22T10:36:49.410-04:00Comments on The Limitations of Me: The Road To Nowhere - A PoemMin (Thalia)http://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-37642396248157997862011-06-01T16:43:32.993-04:002011-06-01T16:43:32.993-04:00Thanks Skyril!Thanks Skyril!Min (Thalia)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-20587810373553901432011-06-01T16:41:58.019-04:002011-06-01T16:41:58.019-04:00I really like this poem, Thalia!
Bravo! :DI really like this poem, Thalia!<br />Bravo! :DSkyril A.K.A the Vociferous Chatterer, Loyal Forever and Always, The Ever-Present, the Pluviophilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957221088712534264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-59743723798331552582011-05-30T17:36:27.285-04:002011-05-30T17:36:27.285-04:00Aww, thanks Kallista ^^ I think that you would be ...Aww, thanks Kallista ^^ I think that you would be amazing at poetry.Min (Thalia)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-84968227283407605582011-05-30T16:38:55.297-04:002011-05-30T16:38:55.297-04:00Wow, Octa, thank you. I really didn't expect s...Wow, Octa, thank you. I really didn't expect such a quick reply. I'll take your advice to heart and apply it to the next poem I write. My Edgar Allen Poe book will now be my constant companion.<br /><br />Once again, I thank you so much.Min (Thalia)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13503909264289999989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3005978002586651447.post-14720803673454700072011-05-30T14:57:06.663-04:002011-05-30T14:57:06.663-04:00I wouldn't call you a rubbish poet!
I'd c...I wouldn't call you a rubbish poet!<br /><br />I'd call you quite a good one.<br /><br />I for one can't write truly happy poems either.<br /><br />I've only recently been able to attempt funny.<br /><br />I like the ABCB rhyming scheme you have there.<br /><br />It's quite effective and is only forced in the third verse. Well done! It is exceedingly hard to rhyme and I recommend using rhyme sparingly. <br /><br />As in 1 out of every 5 or 10 poems you write.<br /><br />Unless you like rhyming. As long as you can make it work.<br /><br />I love the title which is simple but totally brilliant. You've chosen a great subject matter too.<br /><br />My best advice is to keep on practicing, try as much as you can and more impoertantly read lots of poetry. That is vital.<br /><br />Hope I helped. And thankyou for being brave and putting up a poem. It's refreshing to read someone elses poem for a change.Octahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00773418806087920360noreply@blogger.com